Eltesla says:
Can I add a success with a story point?
Oh, sure. If you think it is important for her to succeed in this one (oh no, I forgot to explain story points to anyone who didn't check the rules first-hand!!)
handle says:
Hello! I just joined so I will focus on learning the system real fast and making my character sheet pretty. :)
Hi there! I'll approve your character, just check your point distribution, I suspect something isn't right. You should have 1 ability at 15 (normally your main keyword) and another at 15 or at +10 if it's a breakout, the rest of them is 10. Then you spend 20 points among them. Also, the main flaw is equal to your highest ability, another flaw equal to your second highest and after that, everything is equal to your lowest one.
Furthermore, if you have any modification to the Steel Lotus petalframe (I presume it by the 'banged up' prefix), you're free to describe what's different about it, or maybe it's just a flavorful customization? At any rate, describing it in a short phrase can yield you some breakouts on it. Also, the petalframe ability starts at 5M, not 10, as normal abilities.