TheVagrant says:
Submitted a draft for Fish Chin, a Tasty Swamped skinned Rat Loving Goblin with a Suspicious attitude a scary stare.
My comments are in
italics below each section. Here is what I've found so far with your character sheet:
[ +- ] Character Sheet w/Comments
Name:
Race: Goblin
Physical Description: Tasty swamped skin goblin with intense and suspicious stare.
Size: -1
*No issues here. Choosing Goblin gives you that -1 in Size. So this little section checks out other than your name needs to be finalized and filled in.
ATTRIBUTES (5/5) (+4 points)
Agility: d8
Smarts: d6
Spirit: d12
Strength: d4
Vigor: d6
*Goblin comes with a free d6 in Agility. So, you have 5 points to raise your attributes further. Agility went to a d8, so that is only 1 point due to your racial trait. You placed 1 point in Smarts bringing it to a d6. You placed four points in Spirit to raise it to a d12. You left Strength at d4 and Vigor is a d6 costing another point. You might have overspent here by two points.
DERIVED STATS
Pace:
Parry:
Toughness:
SKILLS
* indicates a Core Skill. (15/15) +2 spirit +2 agi, +3 fighting, +4 intimidate, +1 stealth, healing +2, notice +1
*Athletics: d4
*Common Knowledge:d4
*Notice:d6
*Persuasion:d4
*Stealth:d8
*Survival: d6
fighting: d8
intimidate: d10
healing: d6
Athletics, Common Knowledge, and Persuasion you left at the default d4. You raised Notice to a d6 costing you 1 point. You receive Stealth at a d6 for free but raised it to a d8 for 1 point. You received Survival at a d6 for free due to your racial traits. Fighting you took at a d8 that costs you 3 points. Intimidate you took at a d10 which costs 4 points. Healing you took at a d6 which costs you 2 points. I think you might have one more point to spend on Skills.
HINDRANCES Tasty (Major), Swamp skinned (minor), Suspicious (minor)
I don't see any issues with the Hindrances selected here.
EDGES
Rat lover
Beast master
Cool choice of edges! I'll be anxious to see how they come in handy throughout the campaign. :)
EQUIPMENT & GEAR
Knick nacks : 3 left (from 9)
Crude armor torso
Headband
Looks like your still working on this...I'm passing it over for now.
POWERS (if any)
Gang 9 Swamp rats (6 spirit, 1 rank, 1 Swamp lover, 1 Beast master)
Are you planning on trying to take a power of some sort?
WEAPONS
Spear
Human dagger
I'm passing this section over for now as you finalize things.
NOTES
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Fatigue:
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