Sal Has Written a Play

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Aug 12, 2024 9:41 pm
Viv returns to the stage, the Queen of the Moon gazing down upon Roberto. "Roberto’s body is dead, but I sense his soul lingering near. There may still be a way to save him, Lisbei. And that way is... Is..."

The Lady of the Lake blinks and shifts awkwardly. She looks backstage and catches Sal’s eye. "Um, what’s my line again?"
OOC:
Whoopsie: Forget your lines. @Ysolde, save her!
Aug 13, 2024 5:45 pm
Sal steps in and hands Viv her lines, "To say goodbye, bid the soul adieu and move on with life. The dragon is defeated and he has paid the price, but life goes on. We must all accept that everything is not forever and that there is beauty in things that last for just a brief moment. Fireworks and flowers would not be nearly so beautiful if they did not end. Summer would not be so sweet without cold winter. His soul will move on into the sunless lands but he will not be forgotten. His life may have been short but, his tale shall be as long as the sun."

Sal nods after giving Viv her lines in a soft voice and then steps out and lets the curtain fall. Now everyone comes out to take bows and let the audience cheer them on.
Aug 14, 2024 6:59 am
The crowd cheers wildly as they deem the play a rousing success! Robin wipes away pyroclastic tears and the Rabbits hop with joy!

When it's Yazeba's turn to take her bow, she gives a stiff and perfunctory one. Afterwards, she seeks out Sal. "It's a little rough, as far as drafts go. It could do with some fleshing out of motivations and an extended denouement. There is potential here, though."

Never one to miss a chance for a cutting remark, Yazeba adds, "I would advise you not to squander it as you did your potential for magic."

And with that, the witch departs for her study...
Aug 14, 2024 9:49 pm
Cheers? Huh. There were never any cheers back at The Company. Except during the annual Christmas party, when certain people (not Mr. Boggs, of course) became too tipsy. But those were just drunken hollers about random nonsense, not real cheers.

Mr. Boggs tries to soak it all in...but his raincloud is soaking him, as usual. He looks up at it and sighs. If only it would fade away....

After a few minutes, however, he's feeling pretty good, the cheers having done their work. He also wants to talk to someone, to share this experience. And maybe listen to some praise for his portrayal of Roberto....

But everyone seems otherwise engaged, so instead he addresses the audience:

"Roberto may be dead, but his spirit lives on in all of you!"

As soon as he says it, though, embarrassment hits him like a wave. That was so sappy! Like something you'd see on a ridiculous greeting card, or yelled out by some over-energetic motivational guru. His pragmatic co-workers back at The Company would be ribbing him for weeks if they'd heard him.

Maybe he was too absorbed with all this drama and excitement, and needed to take a step back....
Aug 16, 2024 6:56 am
The stars bask in the crowd's adulation, the rainy weather outside all but forgotten.

And that is the story of Sal's first play!

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