Chalrytharendir says:
So far so good. Casting was satisfying ... specifically not having to follow any strict rules for how the spell works and just going with what felt right in the fiction.
I haven't played many games without a damage tracker (maybe only Microscope), so I'm trying to gauge the effect of getting hit by lightning, I hope it's okay, but let me know if Asha should be more impaired than how I've described.
Everything with 2400 is fiction-first common sense. So if you are in a knife fight risking death and roll 1–2
disaster, you would describe the near-fatal wound a lot differently than if you were in a mage battle with bolts of lightning and got the same roll. Obviously treatment / recovery would be different, too.
Your description of Asha's condition is just fine.