Character Creation and Advancement

Review of Bennekheb, Asimar Inquistor
- seems like you have one extra skill point spent
- for many skills, you've added an unexplained negative modifier, for example Jump: -7. Not sure what is going on there

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So with that, we're on our way!

The negative is from encumbrance for being over a light load.

Is the extra point the duplication of knowledge religion? Because inquisitors have a bonus to use knowledge for identifying creatures I duplicated the line. It's still just knowledge religion, however.

If that is true it should be a bonus rather than a skill rank

- record +2 base fort save Fixed
- add +1 misc to all saves for Sacred Tattoo Fixed
- record your chosen skills for favoured class 8 skill points accounted for (6 for class, +1 for Int, + 1 favored bonus)
- a falchion does 2d4 damage rather than 2d6 Fixed
- Domain - which did you choose? Okay, looks like Destruction as you recorded Destructive Smite as an ability Destruction, but I chose positive energy to reflect the dual nature of Nethys (Creation & Destruction)
- you have Fortune's Favoured listed. What is this, is it a feat? It's a trait, see spoiler below
- you should have one feat. Which did you choose? I took the freebies and adjustments from the Feat Tax post. For my actual one feat, I took Improved Spell Sharing and it is now added to my GP sheet.
- Zaggra - I'll need to review this build later

I missed this earlier but the five four of you that haven't indicated languages known on your character sheet should do so.

Updating shortly...

Hint: One of you should take Osirian, maybe Ancient Osirian as well, if any of you know what is important in old tombs

I had taken both :-)

Absolutely

From the players guide:

Though many Osirians speak Common, they also speak their own Osiriani tongue. Many educated Osirians also speak Ancient Osiriani, which is similar enough to modern Osiriani that those who speak one or the other often encounter little difficulty, though the accent is different. After hundreds of years of Keleshite rule, the Kelish language grew in usage, and it is still spoken today in some places, but few tombs and ruins contain messages written in this language.

Cross does know Ancient Osirian. I'll correct the language later today

Languages: Common and Osiriani ,Ancient Osiriani, Kelish , Auran

Avaline knows common, celestial and ancient Osirian.

You people went hard on the Ancient Osirian. (Makes note to replace all Ancient Osirian with some obscure Inner Sea language.)

It fit the character, nothing more. :)