Nov 30, 2023 11:03 pm
Thank you for the feedback! I agree with all your points.
The mismatch of the genre is confusing. I took a mystery written for wizards applied the Mausritter setting and then got a lot of inspiration from Lilliputian (A Mausritter hack on the high seas). ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Not an excuse or anything. Just sharing my headspace.
But again, I agree the genre could use clarification and tightening up.
The dark moments are unintentional, and certainly not something I'm striving for. I do want to "warn" you all that the odd combination of kid-friendly-cute-adventure elements and dark-doom-danger-adventure elements look as though they are both going to reach their peaks at the exact same moment if the PCs continue on their current trajectory.
I am mostly striving for light-hearted fun, and I'm still learning what works and what doesn't.
The mismatch of the genre is confusing. I took a mystery written for wizards applied the Mausritter setting and then got a lot of inspiration from Lilliputian (A Mausritter hack on the high seas). ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Not an excuse or anything. Just sharing my headspace.
But again, I agree the genre could use clarification and tightening up.
The dark moments are unintentional, and certainly not something I'm striving for. I do want to "warn" you all that the odd combination of kid-friendly-cute-adventure elements and dark-doom-danger-adventure elements look as though they are both going to reach their peaks at the exact same moment if the PCs continue on their current trajectory.
I am mostly striving for light-hearted fun, and I'm still learning what works and what doesn't.