Drgwen says:
... To be clear, I was thinking that the Escape the Situation move here was more to escape Chaudry and this room, not discover the portal out and leave the whole area. ...
Indeed, that second was not supported by the fiction, even the first was not really there. You need to 'take advantage of an opening to escape' and there was not really an opening there. We can say he was distracted by trying to not look at you, allowing an opening to get out of the room.
As you say, that would not get you all that far. But it would turn you from 'captive' to 'prey'.
Drgwen says:
... Chaudry's demonic patron shows up ...
He isn't a Tainted, he is a wizard, "I control demons, not the other way round!" (or so he believes).
Drgwen says:
... I assume he was planning to offer a sacrifice to a demonic patron? ...
Uh, no. To something else, which you don't know yet... but ask yourself: Why here? What's with the hellhound? (You still don't have enough data to understand, maybe you never will (... but not till the result they are aiming for becomes public? (in a small-scale Faction Move (which your actions down here will heavily influence)))).
Drgwen says:
... forces Persephone to become some kind of demon double agent ...
That is interesting... You already sort of are a double agent (or an agent and a half?). There were possibilities for you to work with these guys against your Dark Patron, but the dice tell a different story. :(
Drgwen says:
... Persephone is badly injured, but escapes (harm and corruption, etc); Persephone is killed outright. ...
Well, given the reminder:
Drgwen says:
Delirium says:
According to the debt ledger your patron owes you a debt. You can always use it to make him bring Pers back from the dead. Just a reminder that you're not THAT screwed.
Wow yeah that's a helluva big payoff for a Debt, but sure, if it comes to that, good to know! Could be fun and dramatic, certainly....
That does seem like a big payoff 'for 1 Debt', but remember this is not part of the Debt mechanics, this is part of your sheet, this is your End Move.
Emma is hot, you have supernatural abilities and can't die! :)
I had forgotten about this (I am not looking at your sheets, that is up to you), this does make the situation a lot easier. I actually can think about killing you, which I was trying to avoid before, even though the dice sure keep saying it should happen. :)
We can talk about it.
Drgwen says:
... What I would rather not happen are (1) sexual assault or (2) something that robs her of agency entirely (taken captive, put under mind control etc). ...
Rest assured, none of those were on the table.
Drgwen says:
... If Pers survives this ...
We have just worked out that she will, she can't die. :)
The timing on that we can work out together if we go that route. There will be upsides and downsides to making your return quick vs having them think they succeeded and your coming back 'tomorrow'.
Drgwen says:
... I'd like her to start getting more explicit info from her patron. ...
That was on purpose. Remember your Dark Patron is not overt and explicit, they:
• they seduce all who come into contact with them with pleasantries, gifts, and vices
• they
manipulate their friends, allies, and enemies alike into conflicts that serve their
secret designs
I was playing with your choices.
This was set to change as you go up in Status, but this is still the nature of your Dark Patron, you will need to take active measures to pierce the veil.
Drgwen says:
... One reason she's been floundering is that she is SO in the dark about what this being is, wants, etc, ...
Is this a character problem, or a player problem? The character is supposed to be so. As a player we want this to be fun for you. We can talk about how to change things. Maybe this current experience will lead to a change in the nature of
Persephone's understanding of her Dark Patron, and might change the bullet-points on the sheet, or, maybe better, may result in
Persephone having a better understanding of the bigger picture behind the apparent nature?
Drgwen says:
... Perhaps this experience has demonstrated that Persephone is willing to act creatively to advance her Patron's interests, ... She may be messing things up, but at least she's showing initiative, right? ...
Hmm... I am a bit loath to have your Dark Patron
reward you for doing so badly. You are not exactly acting on their orders, or necessarily in their best interests, for all you know this is Wentworth's petty rivalry. A hint that this is not your Dark Patron's business might come from it withdrawing its favour from you when you tried to act in an official capacity?
The fact that it would still —despite your being 'off the reservation'— bring you back to life (with no (extra) strings attached) should tell you something about your value, though.
Drgwen says:
... does;'t need to be treated like the dumb peon ...
That will comes with Status, I think.
By the rules and mechanics it will be a while before you can get Status-2 in your Faction. But Status is also a thing you can get or lose in the fiction, separate to the Advancement rules.
Maybe, through the experience of death and rebirth,
Persephone gains some deeper understanding of these things and sees a (in firction) way forward to increasing her Status and gaining more access?
If the fiction fits, I am also always happy to ignore the 'only After five advances, may you select:' Advancement rule, especially in PbP. But this could be done purely in fiction.
Drgwen says:
... back from the dead ... Could be fun and dramatic, certainly. ...
As I write this post that is seeming more and more like the obvious way forward. It flows from the string of Misses, and, in the grand scheme of things, does not cost you much (just 1 Debt), and could further the story in the ways you asked for above.
What do you think? We give
Benji one last chance to get to you and 'save you', else we have him find you ... 'dead'?