As Lexi considers making the Neimoidian look like a natural part of the body count and Lissewa looks on, hopeful for the successful revival of the bloodbath's only survivor, Hawke quickly gets to work. Kneeling beside the Neimoidian, pulling out his emergency medpac, he urgently does his best to stabilize him and attend to the severed arm. Meanwhile, Krosus thrusts a stimpack into the unconscious victim's neck. Moments later, their combined efforts have resuscitated the man as he gently stirs, then abruptly seizes for a moment, eyes fluttering open as the stimpack does its work. Based on the damage near the shoulder where the arm is missing, Hawke doesn't think his attempts to treat the grievous injury have helped much, but the victim has been, at the very least, attended to. Which is, as Hawke knows,
usually is a good thing, assuming one doesn't make things worse somehow.
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The Neimoidian begins quivering, trembling as his body continues to try to ward off shock. He frenetically looks at all of you in turn, edging away on his remaining elbow. As he does so, Krosus presses on him, using the Dark Side to squeeze his mind into a submissive acceptance,
"You’re going to be ok, medical services are on the way. Can you tell us what happened here?" He seems to relax a bit as a result of Krosus' manipulations through the force, actually believing that a full medical team is on the way to help him.
Somewhat confused and still dazed, he speaks.
"I...w-we...it was...they were jus' there. All of them. Jus' waitin' for us," his head nods, still weak,
"l-l...-like they knew. Damn Mech'ers." His eyes grew wide, almost bulging as fear and terror completely overwhelmed his voice.
"We w-were fightin'... an' doin' alrgiht... 'til that one jus'... well, he jus' came outta nowhere. Started cuttin' through ev-everyone... DF's, Mech'ers... puttin' 'em down like a whirlwind of death, man!" He trembles as his words trail off, the after effects and trickling remnants of shock combining with a consuming fear. Shaking his head, he begins to sob like a frightened child, crying uncontrollably, escalating in both volume and tears. He rapidly shook his head side to side, frantically, as if he could somehow unsee what he had already seen. He cried out.
"It was jus' so unreal, man! Never saw anything like it! Kriffin' unkriffin believable! Krif man! Kriffin' krif!"
Meanwhile, Tejanna focuses her attention on the damaged datapad, picking it up from the silvery dressed corpse where Lexi had left it. It's in a bad way, to be sure, but she manages to coax it back to some momentary degree of usefulness after opening up the circuit panel and making a few minor adjustments, followed by giving it a gentle smack with her hand for good measure when its screen flickered at her. Within seconds of getting a look at the datapad's screen, its light fades out, leaving the screen, and the datapad, dead.
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OOC:
Meribson, you haven't looked fro cybernetics on corpses yet as you were still attending to the Neimoidian's wounds. Let actions resolve before moving along to other actions; otherwise, it leads to what we currently have with a couple of you doing things out of time.
In the future everyone, wait for the right time for actions. Don't make assumptions. Wait for me to resolve the previous game day and your actions before moving on. I will try to post as early as possible in the current game day to allow you more time to read and post your own character's actions. I adjusted for Krosus, Hawke scavenging for cybernetics just didn't fit as he wouldn't have just walked from the Neimoidian given his reaction and fits, and the only reason Tajanna's decision to check out the datapad works is because she walked away
before the efforts to revive the Neimoidian began in earnest. I tried to make it work the best that I could. Again, in the future, when your character has actions, please wait for them to resolve. Things just won't make sense in PbP sometimes when you do so. For example, you can't ask questions or use Influence powers when someone's still unconscious, and doing so looks strange in the narrative (as it is out of time), especially if he never comes to.
If anything, as part of what your character is doing, in less complex situations you can attach an OOC in the narrative telling me what you would like to do if somethings does happen I'm fine with that, as long as it isn't too complex, as it can help move along the game, avoiding using an entire post for something simple. For example, you might write in OOC at the bottom of you narrative post: "
Once I get the bartender's attention, I'd like to ask him 'Have you seen Darth Vader?"; this will be much more effective than me devoting a post to the bartender coming to serve you, and then you're addition of another
entire post to ask such a simple question.
Also, regarding your Influence CCL (and for anyone that has the Control power aka 'Jedi Mind Trick'), as a simple clarification: For Influence, Light Side points are used to create positive feelings such as friendliness or kindness, Dark Side points for negative such as fear or hate; both, however, can be used to create neutral responses, such as creating confusion or getting them to believe a simple untruth (a
simple lie). In this case CCL, your Dark Side points allow for your the untruth portion (which was your primary aim), but will not convey positive feelings (not that I think you we're going for that, just making sure everyone is aware in general how these mechanics work going forward.