Aug 17, 2015 2:30 am
from the notes of Ellerin Celemiriel, journeyman scholar
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Tenk he jump he over valley
Tenk he thunder loud and strong
Tenk he smash the earth to mountain
Tenk him hundred battles long
Tenk he shout up stream to water
Tenk he start fire in him head
Tenk he stare down rock to anvil
Tenk him eye burn bright and dead
Tenk he fight back hundred kingdoms
Tenk he capture thousand foes
Tenk he gather all him people
Tenk him arm throw Muurgsh down low
Tenk he speak through ear and forehead
Tenk he stand he tall and stone
Tenk he tread he into knowing
Tenk him deep in blood and bone
notes:
Tenk - first hero of orcs. mythical?
poss. name for Muurgsh: first two stanzas = creation myth (small? only valley and mountain. where is Allmother?)
fights Muurgsh though. stanza 3
nvm! fight is to show strength "strong enough to punch our own god. Why shouldn't we all be that strong?"
still means they're separate. Or not?
last stanza more cerebral. from orcs? weird.
orcs learning? haven't seen schools here
"tread into knowing" "deep in blood and bone"ceremonial. need to see one up close
longer ver. used in rituals apparently.
very formal. deliberate. but they worship Muurgsh still? Muurgsh = madness, rage
"throw Muurgsh down low"
stanzas repeat. 'he' and 'him' become 'we' and 'us'. Show of solidarity? cultural identity
Gotta go. Camouflage wearing out.
[EDIT 8/17: Upon consideration, I didn't like that a random outsider knew so much about the grokking mechanism. Rewrote and obscured the notes. Hope that's allowed. -Harden]
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Tenk he jump he over valley
Tenk he thunder loud and strong
Tenk he smash the earth to mountain
Tenk him hundred battles long
Tenk he shout up stream to water
Tenk he start fire in him head
Tenk he stare down rock to anvil
Tenk him eye burn bright and dead
Tenk he fight back hundred kingdoms
Tenk he capture thousand foes
Tenk he gather all him people
Tenk him arm throw Muurgsh down low
Tenk he speak through ear and forehead
Tenk he stand he tall and stone
Tenk he tread he into knowing
Tenk him deep in blood and bone
notes:
Tenk - first hero of orcs. mythical?
poss. name for Muurgsh: first two stanzas = creation myth (small? only valley and mountain. where is Allmother?)
fights Muurgsh though. stanza 3
nvm! fight is to show strength "strong enough to punch our own god. Why shouldn't we all be that strong?"
still means they're separate. Or not?
last stanza more cerebral. from orcs? weird.
orcs learning? haven't seen schools here
"tread into knowing" "deep in blood and bone"ceremonial. need to see one up close
longer ver. used in rituals apparently.
very formal. deliberate. but they worship Muurgsh still? Muurgsh = madness, rage
"throw Muurgsh down low"
stanzas repeat. 'he' and 'him' become 'we' and 'us'. Show of solidarity? cultural identity
Gotta go. Camouflage wearing out.
[EDIT 8/17: Upon consideration, I didn't like that a random outsider knew so much about the grokking mechanism. Rewrote and obscured the notes. Hope that's allowed. -Harden]