Sep 11, 2018 8:43 pm
Excellent work. Let me start breaking that down, then I'll hand you your stats.Nothing out of the ordinary here. Interesting that you're technically of Patrician birth, not that anyone would know that, given your plebeian mother.
Sounds like the best place for you to be born is High Cerbesia, but the Green Griffin Slaughter probably happened in nearby Plokipto instead. Most other places would not be able to shrug off a massacre. Perhaps Cayenne moved there for a short time, but had to flee back to her home city to avoid being caught up in the rumors.This nicely cleans up the loose end of having a Patrician father. Now Cayenne is untethered.Ventasa is actually a country, and on the neighboring continent across a narrow gulf. We can arrange that if you like, but we could also set you up in the marshes of your home nation or a closer one. I think Chimer would be the best option there. It's the nation to the south of yours, and no one would look for you there. There's also definitely Witch Hunters there. Maybe House Pardalis would be a good name for the faction you joined. Chimer is divided into a cat-themed regal kingdom called Leonar, a goat-themed tribal conglomerate called Hirca, and a snake-themed military state called Squama. Pardalis is the scientific name of the Ocelot, so I thought that would suit nicely.
OOC:
"Zafira Whysth was born in Cerbesia, the daughter of reknown aristocrat, adventurer and swordsman Saruhno Whysth, and some nameless concubine."OOC:
"After a youth spent amongst thieves, cut-throats and prostitutes in the lower levels of the city and following her mother's death from the Grey Cough, she set out to make a name for herself and get her father's recognition (along with his estate), working diverse jobs as a burglar, bodyguard and a bounty hunter, amongst other, less savoury occupations (she is rumored to have been part of the Green Griffin Slaughter in xxxxx-*chose a city name*), all the while honing her skills as a swordswoman under her nom de guerre, "Cayenne Blackstarr"."Sounds like the best place for you to be born is High Cerbesia, but the Green Griffin Slaughter probably happened in nearby Plokipto instead. Most other places would not be able to shrug off a massacre. Perhaps Cayenne moved there for a short time, but had to flee back to her home city to avoid being caught up in the rumors.
OOC:
"With the declared intent of challenging the man who abandoned her and her mother to a life of hardship, she made her way to the Whysth's Estate, only to discover that her family had been dispossessed and her father executed for high treason, following inner power struggles amongst the great Houses of Cerbesia, and some other, more somber machinations from a mysterious magical group called the Chapter of The Eight."OOC:
Frustrated from her revenge, she tracked down two of the sorcerers responsible for her family's downfall and put each of them to the sword, after which she fled into the Marshes of xxxxx-*chose a region name...maybe Ventasa?* armed with her only heirloom, her father's accursed blade, the scimitar Lothyir. There, she soon found a venue for her particular talents with the witch hunters of House xxxxx-*chose a family / faction name* .