Ok so I have written a bit of a biography and description of the commissar so hopefully from this you can help me come up with the aspects.
[ +- ] Biography
Augustine Henriques Rodolfo de Gäel was born into wealthy family on Vitera Epsilon, the only child of an officer in the Imperial Guard. He was orphaned at a young age after his father was killed in action, leading him to be taken in by the Schola Progenium and to began his training with the Commissariat. Upon coming of age and beginning his active service, he served as a cadet in the 74th Praxian Fire Corps under Commissar Bradyn. After being promoted and serving with Praxian 'Void dogs' for 9 years, he joined 17th Hestian Phalanx aka 'Adamantine Chimeras' under Colonel Zyphos and served with them for 16 years.
After distinguishing themselves conquering Nymora, the unit was awarded with the Right of Settlement on the planet. Augustine retired and took up a position in the new government, living comfortably in the planetary capital and eventually getting married and having children. He lived peacefully for over 20 years living a comfortable life and enjoying watching his children grow up and leave the planet to launch lives of their own.
His peaceful life was shattered when a Drukhari Kabal raiding fleet descended on Nymora and began slaughtering or enslaving the populace and looting anything of value. Augustine immediately came out of retirement and joined the PDF, leading a counter offensive against the pirates. His wife was killed by a bombardment on the capital, news of death affecting him deeply and causing him to take the fight to enemy with near suicidal zeal. It was during this time, that he also met Inquisitor Killain tasked with disrupting the enemy's activities in a major operation to stop the chaos they had wrought in the sector. It was at this point he joined with the inquisitor, seeking purpose after his retirement was abrupted terminated.
Obviously these details are open to change if something else fits better, e.g. the invaders could easily be chaos or another xenos etc.
[ +- ] Description
He is a tall and well built man, with dark, greying hair cropped short and a thick moustache. He has a long thin nose and high cheek bones giving him a somewhat noble appearance as well as speaking in a manner which reveals his privileged background. As a soldier used to leading from the front lines, he is covered in small scars across his face and body but he wears them gracefully.
He is very stern, which along with his stoicism, gives the impression to those who don't know him as someone cold and humourless, reinforcing a commissar's natural authority. Despite he serious demeanour, he is sociable, regularly talking with his men, sometimes even joking with them, leading him very well respected as well as feared. His upbringing means he is proud, principled and well educated and he has a taste for the finer things in life.
He wears a black undercoat, black combat pants, and combat boots which are covered by the dull-bronze coloured breastplate, gauntlets, and leg armour of the 17th Hestian Phalanx. Making his status as a Commissar plain for all to see, he wears a black great coat with gold and red epaulets, and a peaked officer's cap bearing a winged skull motif. He is equipped with a bolt pistol, a power sword, and an intricately patterned Hestian shortsword.
So far I have that his
High Concept is 'Former Imperial Commissar' and for his
Trouble I thought he could be haunted by/sees visions of his deceased wife who perhaps acts as a sort of conscience to him. Not sure if that works. I think the commissar would have joined the inquisitors retinue rather than been requisitioned so perhaps his
Relationship could be to another PC who is also on the staff? Again not sure, and the same for the last 2 free aspects.