Chapter 1: An intriguing proposal

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Feb 26, 2024 1:09 am
"Sure you did buddy, take a looks at your highlights reel"

Nesta shows him a 10 second video of him landing the final blow on the bot, the video even comes pre-edited with zoom ins and slow motions segments. (And for some reason another video of someone playing "asteroid surfers" below it, something to do with retaining attention)

Nesta has seen and heard enough from the past talks and thinks that having some stable-ish kind of income could be good for the crew, and a free ship is nothing to scoff at, so she signs the document.
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Feb 26, 2024 3:39 pm
Maya listened thoroughly as Markus spoke and took notes of the contract:

Pros: Steady-ish income, a year-long license to work, a year-long ship usage license, travel, the crew together
Cons: 50.000 if anything goes wrong... 50.000!!!


She lingers while looking at her notes and, after a bunch of deep breaths, she finally signs the document.

She then takes a look at Adeon and says:

"Adeon, I chose to sign, it feels like a good deal: travel, money, all of us together, the rest we can deal with, right?! By the way, I don't think there's anything wrong with your hand after your punch, but please check it with Nesta if there's any circuit broken."
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Feb 27, 2024 7:39 pm
htech says:

6. The one-year lease of the ship is on standard Scout Service Detached Duty terms, detailed in Regular Contract SFSS124986. The crew will have to pay for their own life support and fuel costs and must keep the ship in good order in case it is needed. The vessel’s logs will be examined whenever it passes through a Scout Service installation, providing information on starports and ship movements in the area. The Scout Service will overhaul and perform maintenance of the ship at the end of the year, at which time it may or may not be reassigned to another crew.[/f]

"Any questions?"
Ariel Pick his reading glasses, which make him really look like a nerd, finish read the contract, then seriously stare at Markus, and says
"yes i have a question, i think that something is wrong here on clause 6, we'll have to pay for our life support AND Fuel? because it don't make anysense, if you have any kind of enemy or something we will be putting our lifes in risk for your ship, which i'm not seeing any health care here either, which make me wish, if something hapens i could just blow up your ship and die along with it, since if something happens to it, it would be a financial damage that we'll never recover, as specified on clause 4, by the way i agree with that condition, to make sure we make a good job, which i'm not worried about since i'm the best Pilot you'll ever see, BUT still how do you want us to make sure to have a proper development with our job basicaly paying to work, i would agree IF, and only IF we would do something out of your interests but, which is not the case, so in this case, you are the one who should be paying for the life support and Fuel, how do you want to make sure the ship is properly maintained? we could just put cheapiest fuel in there and ruin the whole ship, now a days there is even computer virus that come along with fuel, throw nanobots, to steal your information, change navigation devices and every kind of things and we are no being paid enough to spend money with some expansive and properly safe for everybody, which i repeat there no healthcare there, so that's my only concern and question, to change this clause, because it's your not ours interests, we'll be working for you, not renting anything."
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i don't know if there would be any employment law, even in theory, and in practical i know that it shouldn't happen properly, but if he is not convinced Ariel could be speaking whole day, hahaha he is boring and he wants a good life so he tries hahaha.

and yes, there is no dot only comma, is to read in a row, to lost your beath. hahahaha
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Feb 28, 2024 3:17 am
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Not sure if I understood it right, but I think we would be paying for those things after we are done rescuing the ships and have it on lease, so we would be using it for or own jobs to make money with it not making jobs for him. It would be like renting a car and demanding that the rental place pays for the gas.

Markus Solanis

htech

Feb 28, 2024 9:06 am
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Arthur got it right. After you bring the ship back, it's a lease, not a job. You will "pay" the lease by letting them read the logs and by keeping it in good conditions. To bring it back is a job, but you are getting more than enough credits for it.
"I think you misunderstood. You're not an SFSS employee and you will be free to do as you please after you bring the ship back, as long as you keep the ship in good conditions and know that we will read its logs. About clause 4, we just don't want you to steal those crates and equipment. Install them on the ship and that's solved."
Markus Solanis
Feb 29, 2024 12:53 am
htech says:
The spectators erupted into cheers and applause as they realized the crew had emerged victorious from the simulated battle. Markus, watching from the sidelines, approached with a congratulatory smile.
After hearing the cheers and applause from the spectators, Phantom's expression swiftly transitioned from frustration, due to his strike not having the expected outcome, to euphoria for triumphing over the challenge. Twirling the metal tube through the air like a martial artist flaunting his prowess, his performance was a far cry from the level he had shown against the bot. Sidling up to Adeon, he playfully nudged his shoulder, remarking:

"Hey dude, we make quite the team, huh?"

Returning to where the group and Markus were, he quickly skimmed the contract, eyes darting for terms like "MER," "hazard pay", "pardon"... Phantom was not one for contracts; to him, signing was merely a formality. For an outlaw like him, the only assurance he was familiar with was "La garantia soy yo".
Feb 29, 2024 4:54 pm
arthur12320 says:
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Not sure if I understood it right, but I think we would be paying for those things after we are done rescuing the ships and have it on lease, so we would be using it for or own jobs to make money with it not making jobs for him. It would be like renting a car and demanding that the rental place pays for the gas.
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SHHHHHHHH dont speak it outloud haahahaha
Ariel loses his serious, centered and haughty energy and says to himself "damn, he's smart" then speak outloud "ok then, i had to try." then he draws a pen with a digital tip and with a provocative look he stares at Nesta and says "I prefer the old fashion way, it makes my name more memorable" them he starts to sign the contract with very complex and exagereted moviments.
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Feb 29, 2024 5:43 pm
Nesta scoffs.

"Hipster…"

Markus Solanis

htech

Feb 29, 2024 8:11 pm
Markus Solanis
Lyra's fee is automatically charged but, either way, the 900 credits you received is more money than you had in years, possibly ever.

"Well, I guess that concludes our business meeting, at least for now. R8PO will accompany you back to the docking bay, where you can get your weapons and return to Satton V. From there, I suggest you go shopping for whatever you need and buy a passenger seat to Watson. Good luck and hope to see you soon."

After Markus said that, R8PO appears to escort you back.
OOC:
What do you do? If you wanna roleplay with the droid something, you can do so now. Or buy something in Satton V. Or start a crew's shared fund.

Otherwise, we will begin the next chapter, with the crew looking for an interstellar ticket in the city's starport
Mar 3, 2024 12:16 am
"I will head into town just a minute, anyone want to go with me?"

Nesta will have a Quick Look around town, she will try to stop by a store that sells electronics, she will see how much a shunt is going for, and also going to drool a bit in front of any drones displayed.

She will also try to find a "data runner’s store" or something like that, she is going to try and find someone that could sell her knowledge of what data protocol is used in the planet we are going to.
Mar 3, 2024 11:33 pm
"Yeah sure, I don't have anything else to do. If we have time we can maybe go to that virtual bowling again, this time i'll beat your ass sister Nesta."
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I just made up that we went to some kind of bowling in Satton V one day.
Adeon will just follow Nesta
Mar 4, 2024 4:26 pm
"well, i can go have fun with you too"
Mar 5, 2024 12:02 am
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I think I will skip role-playing all that shopping, as it won't add much to this or future adventures.
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Nesta will have a Quick Look around town, she will try to stop by a store that sells electronics, she will see how much a shunt is going for
We will use standard prices for this specific acquisition. If you wanna, just tell me how many you're buying and you can update your character sheet with it.
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she is going to try and find someone that could sell her knowledge of what data protocol is used in the planet we are going to.
Data Protocol AHZ6547. You downloaded its specs and is already familiar with it. No need to pay for that, it's a pretty standard protocol.
Mar 5, 2024 3:09 am
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I will buy one data shunt and will remove the credits from my sheet, with that I’m all set to go to next chapter if everyone is also done.
Mar 5, 2024 11:38 pm
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I did that for you =)

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