OOC:
Let's start with commlinks. They can come in all sort of models, from basic handheld to implanted headware. I'm assuming everyone's commlink allows them to view AR. Helios' model is presumably handheld and manual. He needs to look at it to see digital information sent to him, or it can speak to him, since he has no other way to interact with it.
Now, the eyewear. If the vision enhancements are supposed to be concealed or disguised, they use the Glasses stats, ie. capacity max 4. If you want up to capacity 6, then we'll use Goggles stats, but lose concealability (too many enchancements are obvious). Default eyewear are wireless, or they can be wired by a universal data cable. If you like, we can say it's an older model, so it doesn't have wireless nor wired capability, but needs to be operated by hand, like the touch of a button.
Physical objects are gray shadows in the astral. So @runekyndig is somewhat correct, wearing eyewear while assensing will show a gray shadow right in front of your eyes. You can still assense, but the goggles hamper that. This is easily solved by saying that you take off your eyewear when you assense, and put it back on after you're done.
Next, for Mystic Adepts, they use Astral Perception in order to assense. Using Astral Perception makes the adept become dual-natured, and gives a -2 dice pool penalty to all non-Magic actions, this will include your Perception roll. If you want to get round that we can of course say that you assense first, complete your assensing, then use your Perception after that.
Putting both together, there's basically a lot going on in what you're trying to do: take off glasses, turn dual-natured, stop being dual-natured, put on glasses, turn on glasses, turn off glasses. Nothing wrong with that, but it's not going to be as stealthy as you think it might be.
Just to clarify, is your Scrutinize roll meant to be a Perception roll? (Trying to add up your 11d6)
Finally, the rolls grant Edge if they are opposed. Eg. if someone is hidden, and you roll Perception with superior dice, this gives you Edge against that person. Think of Edge as 'edge over someone'. But if you use Perception generally, you can perceive all sorts of things in your surroundings, the cars, the cats, the rubbish on the ground, etc, but none of these will give Edge.