Character creation

1) Correct

2)Everything you start with count in the 12000xp built-in, every exp you spent from then built up to increase your rank

3) You get the bIonIc Hand +10 bonus to fine manipulation tests as a bionic arm, but not the Strength bonus. You do not get the +2 TB for the arm location.

Clotted will take the following advances:
---- Talented Pilot (Personal) 500 - additional +10
---- Flesh Render 500 - with chain weapons, roll a single additional die for damage and take highest
---- simple BS 750
---- intermediate WS 500
---- simple Agility 200
---- simple Perception 200
---- Two weapon wielder (melee) 500 - penalty reduced to -10 for both attacks
---- Two weapon wielder (ballistic) 500
---- Double Team 200 - gain additional +10 WS for ganging up

Ok, lets get start reviewing!

@Qrallog I only saw Talented Pilot (Personal) 500 in the rank 2 table, did you have another rank 1 source for it?

@Deadpool your second character will start at 14000xp instaed of 17000xp (2000xp only to spend at character creation)
Add: Master of Arms (1000xp, RoB p.93) is a distinction, not a talent. Thus you need to earn the right to take it, what would the character have accomplished to deserve the distinction?
Signature Wargear, Stalker bolter. Sign. Wargear allow for 20 req of value and The satlker bolter is 15, you can thus add a fireselector permanently on it while still having the normal bolter with fireselector of the Tactical. As the talent is a permanent acquisition, you cannot include a clip of special ammunition in it, but you can use the one from tactical with that new gun of course)

@Dark raider The +20 bonus from armour apply AFTER the unnatural toughness (so 45 +20 SB (4X2)+2=10)
For ease of use, I recommend that your add the Flesh is weak bonus to the total of your armour.

@Krajin Any concept of character yet?

@Everyone Any question I missed?

The story of how Guthroth Hlodvirsson aka "Guts" acquired his Master of Arms Mark of Distinction...

Kvariam Alpha, 966.M41
As the Tau encroach ever-further into Imperial space, they have made a move on the Ocean World of Kvariam Alpha, mining its waters. For a decade Tau operations on Kvariam Alpha go unseen by the Imperium, until it is discovered that they have taken the Ocean World and established deep underwater mining cities throughout its seabed. With the Imperial Guard unable to engage the Tau forces deep below the sea, the Space Wolves are called in.

Before Gunnar Red Moon's Great Company lands on Kvariam's tiny land mass and takes the fight to the Fire Warriors that occupy it, a scouting party is sent to confirm the extent of the enemy forces. Even if only a small force is seen, Guts has the sensation something is amiss... With the squad leaders permission and a camo-cloak, Guts is allowed to go deeper behind enemy lines, with the knowledge that the attack was to happen in a few hours only... Now there was only one hour left, Guts was about 300 meters behind the front lines of the Fire Warriors and a 1000 meters in front of the Tau command center. After trying multiple times to contact his squad leader it was clear that the Tau somehow jammed the frequencies. He quickly climbed on the top of the nearest building and, hidden by his cloak, started firing into the front line of Tau Warriors with his trusted stalker bolter. Since he was using Stalker rounds, nobody had any chance of discovering where the shots came from, creating chaos into the enemy lines, enough chaos that Guts spotted movement from the command center. A Tau was outside, barking orders while moving towards a Tau Battlesuit... A Tau Commander !! Switching to his Kraken rounds, took a deep breath, aimed and fired... The Tau commander's head exploded in front of his dumbfounded lieutenants, creating even more chaos in the ranks. By that time, Gunnar arrived with his troops and despite the superior numbers of the Tau, he quickly dispatched them and established a beachhead. Soon after he launched an underwater assault with Land Raiders. They drove deep into the ocean along the sea bed, the advanced airtight Land Raiders and their adamantium hulls immune against the effects and pressure of the ocean. As the Space Wolves vehicles approach the Tau's underwater cities, they disgorged Terminators and were met by propeller-tailed Battlesuits as well as sleek torpedo-armed underwater craft. A desperate, silent undersea battle erupted that eventually saw the Space Wolves victorious when Gunnar shattered the domes of the Tau mining cities.

Finally realized that there was still a limit of one character per player in the game, now set at 2.

@Krajin Both are good, if more than one member share the same set of skill, it may certainly affect the choice of mission you will be deplyed to.

@Dark Raider That is the correct way to calculate the SB
Armor and TB are only used for mitigating dmg and Flesh is weak in instead for armor. The Unnatural toughness does give extra degree of sucesses for sucessful Toughness check.

@Deadpool Master of Arms Mark of Distinction is approved

You guys feel the characters will be ready to get started in the weekend?